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	<title>Comments on: Thought Readership #19: INTO THE STORM by Dennis N.T. Perkins with Jillian B. Murphy</title>
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		<title>By: Web Design Price</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jan 2013 02:08:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Dr_Liz</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Jan 2013 19:58:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks for your input, Conor. Yes, William Faulkner is credited with first having said, &quot;Kill your darlings,&quot; which was later co-opted by Stephen King. It&#039;s that tendency for writers to get so bound up on what they want to do that they forget about the reader. Will check out your quora offering. Good to hear from you! Liz. ]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for your input, Conor. Yes, William Faulkner is credited with first having said, &#8220;Kill your darlings,&#8221; which was later co-opted by Stephen King. It&#8217;s that tendency for writers to get so bound up on what they want to do that they forget about the reader. Will check out your quora offering. Good to hear from you! Liz. </p>
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		<title>By: syam</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Jan 2013 09:57:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: syam</title>
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		<title>By: Conor</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Jan 2013 18:19:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I just finished Born to Run and in the last few pages of the book the author acknowledges a few people that helped.  His last acknowledgement is to a friend who &quot;lets him know where his stories are valuable, and where a tangent is self-indulgent&quot;.  I loved this phrase.  I know how hard it is to let go of the ideas that are important to me, but are not necessary to the flow of the story.   I wrote a short answer on quora &quot;What are the keys to telling a good story&quot; recently - and 1 central, strong character...  no tangents...  dramatic movement are all necessary.  Clearly they were missing some of these bits and pieces in the Into the Storm book ;-)

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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just finished Born to Run and in the last few pages of the book the author acknowledges a few people that helped.  His last acknowledgement is to a friend who &#8220;lets him know where his stories are valuable, and where a tangent is self-indulgent&#8221;.  I loved this phrase.  I know how hard it is to let go of the ideas that are important to me, but are not necessary to the flow of the story.   I wrote a short answer on quora &#8220;What are the keys to telling a good story&#8221; recently &#8211; and 1 central, strong character&#8230;  no tangents&#8230;  dramatic movement are all necessary.  Clearly they were missing some of these bits and pieces in the Into the Storm book <img src='http://www.activegarage.com/wordpress/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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